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Meet Death Sitting update
Mar. 8th, 2020 03:09 amvia https://ift.tt/32YjgnP
So uhhh I was just going over MDS and making minor typo fixes and things while I was ruminating on edits for the next Little Fishie chapter etc., and I realized abruptly that somehow, an entire almost-2000-word scene in the middle of that first story just… got left out??? It was supposed to happen between chapter 7 and 8 and just. I just didn’t include it. I thought it had been in chapter 7, I think, and when i posted 8 I didn’t include it.
So the opening of 8 didn’t even make sense and nobody mentioned it???
Anyway.
I’ve fixed it, so if you liked that story, especially if right after the Fat Baby song you were like wait how is it the next morning already, then here it is.
I’ll also paste it right in here because I thought it was rather a good scene, and kind of had been surprised nobody had commented on what I thought was a rather hilarious bit where Geralt woke up from meditating and Jaskier and Ciri were watching him and whispering to each other about how creepy it was that his eyes were open and he scared the shit out of both of them by saying “my eyes are open because I’m awake”. HA.
So. Here’s the whole missing bit, and here’s the link to the revised chapter where it’s in context.
Geralt was too nervous to sleep. These people were far too kind. Ridiculously too kind. There had to be something– they were hiding something, surely. He couldn’t scent anything out of the ordinary, couldn’t come up with anything to justify his suspicion, which just made him the more suspicious.
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So uhhh I was just going over MDS and making minor typo fixes and things while I was ruminating on edits for the next Little Fishie chapter etc., and I realized abruptly that somehow, an entire almost-2000-word scene in the middle of that first story just… got left out??? It was supposed to happen between chapter 7 and 8 and just. I just didn’t include it. I thought it had been in chapter 7, I think, and when i posted 8 I didn’t include it.
So the opening of 8 didn’t even make sense and nobody mentioned it???
Anyway.
I’ve fixed it, so if you liked that story, especially if right after the Fat Baby song you were like wait how is it the next morning already, then here it is.
I’ll also paste it right in here because I thought it was rather a good scene, and kind of had been surprised nobody had commented on what I thought was a rather hilarious bit where Geralt woke up from meditating and Jaskier and Ciri were watching him and whispering to each other about how creepy it was that his eyes were open and he scared the shit out of both of them by saying “my eyes are open because I’m awake”. HA.
So. Here’s the whole missing bit, and here’s the link to the revised chapter where it’s in context.
Geralt was too nervous to sleep. These people were far too kind. Ridiculously too kind. There had to be something– they were hiding something, surely. He couldn’t scent anything out of the ordinary, couldn’t come up with anything to justify his suspicion, which just made him the more suspicious.
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