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torrilin replied to your post:i sort of feel like chapter six is one of those…
Let it be as weird as it needs to be to get a shitty second draft, and get into chapter 7 to see if that has stupid tone shifts too. Or plot leakage, or anything else that makes you angry.
ha this is the third draft. but moving on to ch 7 was a good idea, i did that yesterday, and came back and had made mental progress and fixed some things and oh, it’s worse now.

torrilin replied to your post:i sort of feel like chapter six is one of those…
Let it be as weird as it needs to be to get a shitty second draft, and get into chapter 7 to see if that has stupid tone shifts too. Or plot leakage, or anything else that makes you angry.
ha this is the third draft. but moving on to ch 7 was a good idea, i did that yesterday, and came back and had made mental progress and fixed some things and oh, it’s worse now.
