dragonlady7

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This was supposed to be a plotty adventure story, why are you taking your clothes off?? No! No? Aughh that was supposed to be a supporting character, not a love interest– oh my god they were all supposed to be supporting chara– how are you fucking all of them??? I mean, literally, how, this choreography is– aughh oh my lord.

OK fine. This one’s a PWP. Two characters, compatible gender/sexual orientations, good chemistry, let’s get some unreliable narrator going where the POV character doesn’t understand that the other one’s pining, oh yes that’s delicious, now let’s get them both drunk and bonus, now they’re snowed in. Go!

… it’s been seven pages, and you’re still having philosophical discussions about free will. Somebody’s dick was supposed to be out by now. I…

OK fine, let’s just write this one without a plan, and let it be what it wants to be. … …
… uhhh I don’t… you’re 60k long and I don’t know what you are yet. What are you?

Jeez, sorry I asked. <br /