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dragonlady7via http://ift.tt/2hbxHQV:buttons-beads-lace replied to your post “Yaaaaaay B you finished the thing! Congratulations!”
yeah the important part isn’t the ‘stop writing about it’ part, it’s the 'you get to say you have a Finished Thing’ part. I’d love to read about poe’s moustache.
sugarspiceandcursewords replied to your post “Yaaaaaay B you finished the thing! Congratulations!”
YES MORE POE FUCKING WITH HIS DAD or reuniting with Norasol or really anything. I haven’t commented on the last chapter yet because I despair of coming up with a comment that encapsulates even a fraction of what I feel for this series.
LOL you want to know what I just did? I meant to write like a 500-word transition scene to gloss over the time passing between two scenes, and instead I launched into a 7,000 word action scene involving no less than twelve knife murders and a deep exploration into a character’s inner feelings. It was supposed to be a transitional paragraph to indicate time passing.
(This is Lost Kings, not the Yavin IV Extra Fluff Scenes, but. I’m writing them concurrently and using Kes’s youthful experiences to inform the 32-years-later So Here’s What You Missed, Kid scenes.)
I am not good at this. Or maybe I’m really good at this but I’m not defining the parameters correctly.
“Fuck’s sake, Dameron,” someone said on the comm, and he was pretty sure it was Corporal Nella, “there are fucking corpses everywhere, what the fuck are you doing?”
“Not getting fucking captured,” Kes snapped.
Meanwhile, 32 years later on Yavin IV,
[Norasol:] “Here’s the game: let’s pretend we love the moustache and think Poe looks very distinguished. This will drive Kes insane.”
“You really think so?” Nessa asked.
“I know so,” Norasol said. “I’ve been driving that boy crazy since before he figured out how peek-a-boo worked, and I won’t stop until after I’m dead, so trust me, I know so.”
yeah the important part isn’t the ‘stop writing about it’ part, it’s the 'you get to say you have a Finished Thing’ part. I’d love to read about poe’s moustache.
sugarspiceandcursewords replied to your post “Yaaaaaay B you finished the thing! Congratulations!”
YES MORE POE FUCKING WITH HIS DAD or reuniting with Norasol or really anything. I haven’t commented on the last chapter yet because I despair of coming up with a comment that encapsulates even a fraction of what I feel for this series.
LOL you want to know what I just did? I meant to write like a 500-word transition scene to gloss over the time passing between two scenes, and instead I launched into a 7,000 word action scene involving no less than twelve knife murders and a deep exploration into a character’s inner feelings. It was supposed to be a transitional paragraph to indicate time passing.
(This is Lost Kings, not the Yavin IV Extra Fluff Scenes, but. I’m writing them concurrently and using Kes’s youthful experiences to inform the 32-years-later So Here’s What You Missed, Kid scenes.)
I am not good at this. Or maybe I’m really good at this but I’m not defining the parameters correctly.
“Fuck’s sake, Dameron,” someone said on the comm, and he was pretty sure it was Corporal Nella, “there are fucking corpses everywhere, what the fuck are you doing?”
“Not getting fucking captured,” Kes snapped.
Meanwhile, 32 years later on Yavin IV,
[Norasol:] “Here’s the game: let’s pretend we love the moustache and think Poe looks very distinguished. This will drive Kes insane.”
“You really think so?” Nessa asked.
“I know so,” Norasol said. “I’ve been driving that boy crazy since before he figured out how peek-a-boo worked, and I won’t stop until after I’m dead, so trust me, I know so.”
