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dragonlady7via http://ift.tt/2jOCNSU:unicornduke replied to your post “Im super dying to read your cassian/bodhi story and every time you…”
I love everything about this
I am still not sure what the structure is and how to make it work but it’s going places, it sure is.
“Jeron,” he said, intense, breathing hard.
“Cassian,” Jeron said, and it jolted Bodhi for a moment, but then he followed it up with, “my real name– Cassian–”
“Cassian,” Bodhi said, and Jeron– or, he supposed, Cassian– groaned, heart-felt and desperate. “Come on, then,” Bodhi said, his heart softening as he realized what that meant.
“Bodhi,” Cassian gasped. “Bodhi–”
“Yeah,” Bodhi said, and Cassian made a high, pleading, broken sort of noise, and came, shivering and gasping.
“Bodhi,” Cassian pleaded, shivering and breathless.
“That’s my real name,” Bodhi said. “I promise.”
I love everything about this
I am still not sure what the structure is and how to make it work but it’s going places, it sure is.
“Jeron,” he said, intense, breathing hard.
“Cassian,” Jeron said, and it jolted Bodhi for a moment, but then he followed it up with, “my real name– Cassian–”
“Cassian,” Bodhi said, and Jeron– or, he supposed, Cassian– groaned, heart-felt and desperate. “Come on, then,” Bodhi said, his heart softening as he realized what that meant.
“Bodhi,” Cassian gasped. “Bodhi–”
“Yeah,” Bodhi said, and Cassian made a high, pleading, broken sort of noise, and came, shivering and gasping.
“Bodhi,” Cassian pleaded, shivering and breathless.
“That’s my real name,” Bodhi said. “I promise.”
