morvran voorhis, nilfgaard, the witcher, fic update, series update
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Due to my failure to anticipate quite how much of Fit For Pearls there was
going to be, I made some structural choices, and so instead of just having
straight-ahead sequels I gotta go back and fill in some earlier material.
Instead of literally any of the things I meant to, I very quickly wrote
this backfill story set in late summer of 1271, because it was for some
reason easier to do than any of the complicated stuff I need to do. Listen
this is my idea of being gentle with myself.
So I present to you, in atonement for a blank Friday, this nice little
Monday update of a standalone short prequel.
The Boy General, on AO3 https://archiveofourown.org/works/40719273.
Yeah mostly this is me being like “CDPR please google how military ranks
work and what a division is” to go alongside my overarching thesis of
“CDPR, this book character was described as a child in 1268 why is he 45
in 1271?”
[Here is the quick result of my research: 1) officers: start as lieutenant
-> captain -> major -> lt. colonel -> colonel -> major general ->
lieutenant general -> general - maybe a marshal?. (in different systems
there may be more fine gradations of generalship but there are gonna be
like five guys who get that far for it to matter anyway; this is the basic
outline.) 2) an Army or Group is made of several Corps commanded by a
lieutenant general or general, and a Corps is made of a handful of
Divisions commanded by a major general or maybe lieutenant general, and a
Division is commanded by a colonel or major general at most, and so if
Morvran is 1) 18, 2) a general, and 3) in command of a division, something
is sort of hinky. Before you protest that the modern US Army is not the
same as the Nilfgaardian Army, no I know, but Sapkowski organized his shit
this way too because guess what, he was writing about WWII, at least in
part, and people who miss that do miss a lot of the point of the books. And
military ranks work the way they do for reasons, but. Whatever. Okay.
Here.]
anyway. i still have to go make Fit For Pearls into a series. I’ll get
there. Meanwhile here.
“I’m sure,” Braibant said, “that you’ve had very high expectations placed
on you for most of your life, and as such you likely believe that it’s
possible to do everything perfectly. But that’s just not how war works,
Voorhis.”
The mask fell away, and just for a moment, the boy looked at him with huge,
tragic eyes, unnervingly pale blue, tired and frightened. Braibant bit down
ruthlessly on his desire to embrace the poor child, and just looked back at
him. Voorhis pulled himself together after a moment, setting his jaw, and
if he couldn’t quite get the tragic look out of his eyes at least he broke
the eye contact. “Well,” he said, and it was a little hollow but he was
making a credible stab at resolute, “I still have room for improvement.”
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