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idlesuperstar:
Owen’s first draft of Anthem For Doomed Youth, with his own reworkings, as well as Sassoon’s pencilled amendments.
I love this quite ridiculously. Not only because it’s one of my favourite poems ever, but also for the distance between first draft and final poem. Owen is struggling towards something astounding, but here there’s no “stuttering rifle’s rapid rattle” (what happened? Did that line come to him first, or did he find the ‘cattle’ image and it come from there?) and it’s an insight into the work that goes into producing something seemingly effortless. And also shows how useful another writer’s eye can be.
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idlesuperstar:
Owen’s first draft of Anthem For Doomed Youth, with his own reworkings, as well as Sassoon’s pencilled amendments.
I love this quite ridiculously. Not only because it’s one of my favourite poems ever, but also for the distance between first draft and final poem. Owen is struggling towards something astounding, but here there’s no “stuttering rifle’s rapid rattle” (what happened? Did that line come to him first, or did he find the ‘cattle’ image and it come from there?) and it’s an insight into the work that goes into producing something seemingly effortless. And also shows how useful another writer’s eye can be.
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