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so for a couple months now i’ve been working on an original fic based off an idea for a Goblin Emperor A/U I’d come up with and decided would be really involved to write.
I’ve got like. 60k words, and it’s time for me to admit that I’ve got to go back and do a better job of filing the serial numbers off initially, because while I did a good job at making distinct variations off the characters, I set it in the setting too closely and it’s weird. Like, I changed a bunch of stuff, so fundamentally it’s quite different, but it starts at midnight with a message arriving at a remote hunting lodge, and none of those details really have to be quite so close to the original material as they are, and I know what else to put in there instead. So that’s got to happen, which means rewriting, which means throwing out a lot.
And it’s not wasteful, really; it’s all fertilizer, and most of it I can just retype and edit as I go and make much faster progress than I would in the initial composing, and the setting change has given me a whole additional B-plot and a stable of characters that will prove useful. But it’s also reminding me that I need to like, structure a plot, and somehow despite twenty years of doing this, I’m still not great at that. I had meant to just– get the plot squared away, but now I’m realizing no, I need to get the beginning down because it affects the plot a lot and I should know where I started before I try to get where I’m going.
Anyhow. Just kind of felt like poking at that; I don’t know if I’ve talked about it much, but that’s what I’ve been working on when I haven’t been distracted by Good Omens.
One thing I’m pleased with is the main female character– she’s a courtier, a libertine, a rake, addicted to dueling and completely enamored of unnecessary drama. She’s just the best to write, and like, sure, you can see where I started from Csethiro’s fancies of knights-errant, but I largely gender-inverted the society, so she’s both more and less rebellious.
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It meant she was in fantastic condition, and could dress to show that off, which she liked to do. She’d begun the current trend for very fitted trousers on women, to show off her magnificent thighs, and nobody else wore them as fetchingly as she did. She currently had her tailor making her a daringly low-backed dress for the upcoming coronation, to show off the definition of her back muscles; she doubted that would catch on as a trend, unless people missed the point, because few of the ladies of court would have back muscles like that to show off.
[…]
Rusada said nothing for a moment, looking up at her with a no movement but a single quirk of her eyebrow. “What’s wrong,” she said finally. “Why, nothing’s wrong, Liatra. But.” She freed one hand from where her arms were crossed over her chest, and began counting on its fingers with her other hand. “Firstly, my little-father Deladar tells me he can’t be held liable if he kills you, as he learned dueling under the old rules and so can’t be satisfied with forfeits.”
“Does that mean I can kill him?” Liatra asked. She was just aching for any plausible way she could earn herself a kill, even with these idiot new rules against them. She knew Deladar was sharp and in-practice despite not having been allowed to duel for nearly twenty years, but she wasn’t afraid of him. She was sharper.
“No,” Rusada said.
so for a couple months now i’ve been working on an original fic based off an idea for a Goblin Emperor A/U I’d come up with and decided would be really involved to write.
I’ve got like. 60k words, and it’s time for me to admit that I’ve got to go back and do a better job of filing the serial numbers off initially, because while I did a good job at making distinct variations off the characters, I set it in the setting too closely and it’s weird. Like, I changed a bunch of stuff, so fundamentally it’s quite different, but it starts at midnight with a message arriving at a remote hunting lodge, and none of those details really have to be quite so close to the original material as they are, and I know what else to put in there instead. So that’s got to happen, which means rewriting, which means throwing out a lot.
And it’s not wasteful, really; it’s all fertilizer, and most of it I can just retype and edit as I go and make much faster progress than I would in the initial composing, and the setting change has given me a whole additional B-plot and a stable of characters that will prove useful. But it’s also reminding me that I need to like, structure a plot, and somehow despite twenty years of doing this, I’m still not great at that. I had meant to just– get the plot squared away, but now I’m realizing no, I need to get the beginning down because it affects the plot a lot and I should know where I started before I try to get where I’m going.
Anyhow. Just kind of felt like poking at that; I don’t know if I’ve talked about it much, but that’s what I’ve been working on when I haven’t been distracted by Good Omens.
One thing I’m pleased with is the main female character– she’s a courtier, a libertine, a rake, addicted to dueling and completely enamored of unnecessary drama. She’s just the best to write, and like, sure, you can see where I started from Csethiro’s fancies of knights-errant, but I largely gender-inverted the society, so she’s both more and less rebellious.
________
It meant she was in fantastic condition, and could dress to show that off, which she liked to do. She’d begun the current trend for very fitted trousers on women, to show off her magnificent thighs, and nobody else wore them as fetchingly as she did. She currently had her tailor making her a daringly low-backed dress for the upcoming coronation, to show off the definition of her back muscles; she doubted that would catch on as a trend, unless people missed the point, because few of the ladies of court would have back muscles like that to show off.
[…]
Rusada said nothing for a moment, looking up at her with a no movement but a single quirk of her eyebrow. “What’s wrong,” she said finally. “Why, nothing’s wrong, Liatra. But.” She freed one hand from where her arms were crossed over her chest, and began counting on its fingers with her other hand. “Firstly, my little-father Deladar tells me he can’t be held liable if he kills you, as he learned dueling under the old rules and so can’t be satisfied with forfeits.”
“Does that mean I can kill him?” Liatra asked. She was just aching for any plausible way she could earn herself a kill, even with these idiot new rules against them. She knew Deladar was sharp and in-practice despite not having been allowed to duel for nearly twenty years, but she wasn’t afraid of him. She was sharper.
“No,” Rusada said.